I feel you did a great job with the technique of your elevator pitch. You started by stating the problem or the reasoning behind your idea, and then slowly built upon your solution and the effects your solution is going to have. Your voice inflections got stronger and more pronounced as the video went on, which also added to the aesthetic aspect of your pitch. Well done, you did a great job.
You did a great job! Your pitch was well structured and had all the important aspects. I like how you mentioned that this industry is still in its infancy, this informs the investors that there is room to grow. I also like that you mentioned the barriers of entry, so they can know the risks of entering this market.
Graham,
ReplyDeleteI feel you did a great job with the technique of your elevator pitch. You started by stating the problem or the reasoning behind your idea, and then slowly built upon your solution and the effects your solution is going to have. Your voice inflections got stronger and more pronounced as the video went on, which also added to the aesthetic aspect of your pitch. Well done, you did a great job.
Hello Graham,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job! Your pitch was well structured and had all the important aspects. I like how you mentioned that this industry is still in its infancy, this informs the investors that there is room to grow. I also like that you mentioned the barriers of entry, so they can know the risks of entering this market.
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