The feedback received of my first pitch was very positive. I decided to explain the idea a little more in this pitch, give a better picture of the final goal.
Hey Graham. I actually still remember your first pitch and it was awesome. Your idea is incredibly cool and I think you nailed the pitch. I like how you went into what the exact purpose was. You also have great knowledge of the market and the pitch excels because of it. Overall great idea and fantastic pitch.
I didn't see your first pitch, but I think your idea is really great! The way you told us about the market growth of VR in the future and your knowledge of the field really caught my attention. Your presentation of the pitch was also excellent! This idea could really go somewhere! Great work!
This pitch was much improved from the first pitch and very impressive, good job! The only advice I can think of for you is to maybe explain your product a little more. Being someone that doesn't know very much about VR, I was still a little confused at the end of your pitch. Overall though, great presentation and confidence during your pitch!
Hi Graham, Your pitch is absolutely great! You seem very confident and sure about yourself which is very important and it also makes the audience feel like you are trustworthy individual. Also, You spoke very slowly and pronounced every word very carefully. I think this is great because your idea is complicated and slowing it down for normal people like me makes me understand it better and give me a better grip on the actual idea.
Hey Graham. I actually still remember your first pitch and it was awesome. Your idea is incredibly cool and I think you nailed the pitch. I like how you went into what the exact purpose was. You also have great knowledge of the market and the pitch excels because of it. Overall great idea and fantastic pitch.
ReplyDeleteHi Graham,
ReplyDeleteI didn't see your first pitch, but I think your idea is really great! The way you told us about the market growth of VR in the future and your knowledge of the field really caught my attention. Your presentation of the pitch was also excellent! This idea could really go somewhere! Great work!
Hi Graham,
ReplyDeleteThis pitch was much improved from the first pitch and very impressive, good job! The only advice I can think of for you is to maybe explain your product a little more. Being someone that doesn't know very much about VR, I was still a little confused at the end of your pitch. Overall though, great presentation and confidence during your pitch!
Hi Graham,
ReplyDeleteYour pitch is absolutely great! You seem very confident and sure about yourself which is very important and it also makes the audience feel like you are trustworthy individual. Also, You spoke very slowly and pronounced every word very carefully. I think this is great because your idea is complicated and slowing it down for normal people like me makes me understand it better and give me a better grip on the actual idea.